Wednesday, August 24, 2016

Writing term 3 Olympic writing.

Here I was at the stadium watching the….           


Women's sevens of the Olympics Canada v NZ. It's Canada's kick off a
great catch from NZ she runs it up the guts hard but gets taken down by Canada. NZ get blow over the ball and get it back. The winged  sprints down the sideline but is tackled out. It is out by NZ. Canada bifs it then the lady sprints down the sideline and scores. Boo I said.  Canada has scored. 

The whistle blew  for half time they quickly swapped sides and kicked the 
The ball. Go NZ!! Score a try! NZ grabbed the ball stepped a few people and scored. Yay! I shouted we score. 
It is our conversation we kicked the ball up in the air. 

It looks like we have got this it hits the post but it still goes over waho it is 
over the post with NZgw in the lead Canada comes back with an awesome try we are still in the lead. Canada kicked the ball boom! NZ is tackled out it is Canada's through in. 

She bifs it to the back of the line out and sprints up the sideline but is wasted by
NZ suddenly NZ gets the ball back and scores waho! I said we have scored.
The score was 19 12 we win!



 








Monday, August 8, 2016

Writing term 3

WALT: use a short Vowel  sound. 

Here is my recount. 

It was my turn to go flying off a steep bank. I lept into the air I had a soft landing in the sand at the bottom. I raced back up the bank to jump again. I pounced off the bank and landed soft at the bottom. The sand was so soft so  I decided  to make a sandcastle. When it was finished I covered it in lots of Beautiful shells big and small then I dug a little hole around it and filled it with water. 

Then. I put a big wall around it made out of shells. Then my uncle Shawn shouted out “who wants to play rugby”me! All off my cousins were split into teams. I have 25 cousins.  We all lined up. Shawn kicked the ball high in the air 
and I chased after it. I ran so fast then  I dummied it and then passed to Jacob he ran straight but he got tackled. He got the ball back to me and I scored.  

We all sat down and ate lunch.  I dived into the freezing cold ocean and smashed around in the waves. I could here the waves crashing on the sand. I played in the waves for hours it was so fun. It was now time to do the long journey home through the forest and through the farm and to the home. “ here we go” I complained. We ran in gum boots up very steep hills. 

I was so puffed out but I get on going. It took us half an hour to get all the way up there we got half way up when vrommmmm! There was too Utes coming down the track.yay! I shouted we don't have to walk any more we can get picked up in the back of the utes.  The too utes struggle to get up the steep hills but we got there. Finally we were home.