Writing

We Had to write a piece of writing and try to include onomatopoeia. I think that I have used some. 

Cross country 

It was Wednesday morning and I was trying to get my shoes on. Mum was driving me to Farndon Park to run in cross country. When we got to Farndon Park they put us in age groups, the 11 year olds had to run with us because there was only three of them but that didn't worry  me. The ten year old girls ran first, watching them made me even more nervous. The clappers went. Bang! They were off. Mr eales  said on the microphone “next ten year old boys”we all lined up… bang!! We sprinted off I was determined to beat max and come 3rd. My heels were killing me! Max shouted “ ha I'm betting you” that made me angry so I sprinted in front and over tock Max. “Shame” I shouted back. Now I was coming 3rd, Harvey was in front of me. I saw the finish line we all sprinted to the end a bit of luck happened, Harvey's shoelace was undone and he tripped “ burger it!” He shouted. This made me get 2nd! At the end everyone sat down for the certificates. Mrs scott said “ 1st 10 year old boys Tyler Wait, 2nd Rhys Llewellyn, 3rd Harvey O'rourke. Harvey was not happy but I was!